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Friday, October 23, 2015

My part to help the world


         There are so many people that can help this world  you can be a doctor to help kids be  healthy.  You can also be a vet to help animals there are so many things you can do to help.  I am going to help by being a teacher to help kids learn.  I also want to help the poor kids that do not have food or water. There or more than one hundred jobs that you can do to help the world!!

2 comments:

  1. Dear cupcakes101,
    I really liked your post. You had great use of language and a great verse. Just make sure that you have one space in-between each word and correct punctuation markings.

    From,
    swimmerpuppy08

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  2. Dear Cupcakes101,

    I liked how organized your post was. you did make a few capitalization errors and spelling errors, but overall, your post was very good.

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