Friday, October 23, 2015

My part to help the world

         There are so many people that can help this world  you can be a doctor to help kids be  healthy.  You can also be a vet to help animals there are so many things you can do to help.  I am going to help by being a teacher to help kids learn.  I also want to help the poor kids that do not have food or water. There or more than one hundred jobs that you can do to help the world!!


  1. Dear cupcakes101,
    I really liked your post. You had great use of language and a great verse. Just make sure that you have one space in-between each word and correct punctuation markings.


  2. Dear Cupcakes101,

    I liked how organized your post was. you did make a few capitalization errors and spelling errors, but overall, your post was very good.